can you feel the death is coming?
can you say when winter ends?
can you see the veil is falling?
can you hear the falling sand?

never, never, think it twice,
fading soul like melting ice,
stink of decay, filled with hate,
broken toys, just toys of fate
snow keeps falling on my hands,
demons calling, dragged to end,
broken wings that cannot fly,
I'm a witness, and they die
every night I feel the same,
nightmares, horrors without name,
then I wake up, feel the heat,
losing people who I need

blood is flowing, tears are wept,
there's no room for secrets kept,
no more places I can run,
no more barriers, let's have fun

axes swinging in the air,
heads are falling, I'm still there,
throats are strangled, wrists are cut,
lives that end in single shot,
when she burns I hear her scream,
minutes, hours, so it seems,
poisoned veins, she chokes and cries,
dust just falls on blinded eyes

fading lives that can't be spared,
wanna go back? I won't dare,
I just want to rest a bit,
to get out what I need to spit

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anulienka  13. 10. 2008 21:39
Da sa anglicka basen rymovat?
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bassika  13. 10. 2008 21:57
ta basen je uzasna ...neuveritelne dobre citatelna s rytmom ,krasna ..bohuzial, hovori o dost desivej skutocnosti,ktora sa odohrava realnemu cloveku.. ....citam ju uz 4 krat ...cest autorovi...
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bassika  13. 10. 2008 22:03
Anulienke...ano, ako vidis da ...
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antja  13. 10. 2008 22:10
wow, pekne...niet co dodat, precitene
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anyss91  13. 10. 2008 22:23
je to super...super...napisane, inak to neni az tak super ...len v jednej casti mi nieje jasne co si tym myslel, ale o tom osobne ... a dufam, ze to coskoro skonci
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rybabla  14. 10. 2008 21:34
komenty nadomnou to vystihli ...hlavne cest prvemu komentu ... neviem co take povedat na to ... ale fakt vynikajuco vyjadrene ... cloveka to az vtiahne do tvojej situacie
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nimo  15. 10. 2008 15:04
naozaj velmi pekne...to si pisal podla vlastnych pocitov?
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kix  16. 11. 2008 00:06
perfektne...myslim ze ostatne slova su uplne zbytocne...mozno len tolko ze ked clovek naozaj pise to, co citi/vidi/zaziva je to cititelne aj pre citatela a tebe sa to podarilo...super
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tsunade  1. 2. 2009 19:05
úžasná báseň, čo dodať? veľmi sa mi páči, je strhujúca
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