I'm sitting here in this stupid cell
and you think that's typical me in my own hell.
Well, that's right I'm prisoner,
in this stupid room in my own corner.

I see only light black like coal,
You think I'm blind,
I think you steal me my soul,
but it's nevermind.
It's nevermind cause I like your sins,
in our passion we can dance in song of mims.

We should cry, scream and burnt the sky,
we shouldn't say last godbye.
godbye my sins, goodbye my pain,
goodbye, I hate you, you are my living rain,
You kill my sins, rip them on me,
on my body full of scars which you can\'t see,
cause we aren't from this world,
cause our hearts are not cold enough,
to see things which you don't,

But stil sorry and come to my world,
stay by me and be my lord,
with our pain we still can love,
cause our hearts are not cold enough,
to don't fall in love.

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dreamagall  21. 4. 2009 23:06
tvoja angličtina mi trhá oči ale obsah je celkom dobrý i ked mierne klišé.
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sculptus  22. 4. 2009 00:17
Nie..

cital som aj forum...

pozri.. ak sa chces seriozne zaujimat o svoj literarny rozvoj.. nehladaj kritiku tu.. tu ju nenajdes.. ziadnu..

ta basen nema velmi rytmus, nema velmi ani obsah, ani dobre rymy, obsah je strasne klise.. ale nic co by si casom neporiesil..
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ejo333  22. 4. 2009 17:03
ty no tak toto som hladall.....
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