Dvaja na Svete

Našli sa dvaja, v sladkom poblúznení,
vo svete slepých a hluchých, len oni boli nemý.

Vo svete slepých a hluchých, boli odlišní,
aj preto sa ich cesty, nakoniec rozišli.

Našli sa dvaja, srdcia zblížené,
a zanechali rany, rany otvorené,
...Ostala púšť pustá....
Slepý vďačí že nevidí krutosť ľudí,
hluchý, že ho krik nebudí.
...Tak neotváraj nemo ústa...

Lebo ty vidíš krutosť ľudí,
a ich krik ťa zo sna budí,
...A ako ja...
Ako ty, aj ja to viem,
len nemý, to nepoviem.
...Tiež nedôjdeš pokoja...

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galinka  12. 1. 2008 01:13
Hodnú chvíľu som len tak sedela a rozmýšľala nad tou básňou... je pekná, ale tie dve predtým sa mi páčili viac.. Prečo? Lebo som len človek.. presne taký ako sú ľudia v tvojej básni - buď nechcú vnímať čo sa okolo nich deje, alebo keď to aj vnímajú, tak o tom len veľmi neradi hovoria..
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patrisha  12. 1. 2008 10:36
velmi pekné
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soriri  12. 1. 2008 10:36
Táto je jedna z najlepších, čo som od Teba čítala.

Vidíš to všetko. No pravdepodobne dôjde k zmene. S vekom chodia klapky na oči a štuple do uší. (I'm negative about this)

Reakcia s podnetom- svet?
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yoda  12. 1. 2008 10:47
Dear Diary, Mood: Apathetic

My life is spiraling downward

I couldn’t get enough money to go to the Blood Red romance andsuffocate me dry concert

It sucks because they play some of my favorite songs like, Stab My Heart because I Love You and Rip Apart My Soul and of course Stabby, Rip, Stab, Stab

And it doesn’t help that I couldn’t get my hair to flippy thing either, like that guy from that band could do. Somedays.

I’m an emo kid, non-confroming as can be you’d be non-conforming to if you looked just like me

I have paint on my nails and makeup on my face

I’m almost emo enough to start shaving my legs, cause I feel real deep when I’m dressing in drag I call it freedom of expression, most just call me a fag

Cause our dudes look like chicks and our chicks look like dikes

Cause emo is one step below tranvestite

Stop my breathing and slit my throat

I must be emo

I don’t jump around when I go to shows

I must be emo

I’m dark, and sensitive with low self esteem

The way I dress makes everyday feel like Halloween

I have no real problems but I like to make believe

I stole my sisters mascara and now I’m grounded for a week

Sulking and writing poetry are my hobbies

I can’t get through a Hawthorne Heights album without sobbing

Girls keep breaking up with me

It’s never any fun they say they already have a pussy

They don’t need another one

Stop my breathing and slit my throat

I must be emo

I don’t jump around when I go to shows

I must be emo

Dye in my hair nail polish on my toes

I must be emo

I play guitar and write suicide notes

I must be emo

My life is just a black abyss

You know? It’s so dark

And its suffocating me

Grabbing a hold of me and tightening its grip

Tighter than a pair of my little sisters jeans.

Which look great on me, by the way

When I get depressed I cut my wrists in every direction

Hearing songs about getting dumped give me an erection

I write in a live journal and wear thick rimmed glasses

I tell my friends I bleed black and cry during classes

I’m just a bad, cheap, imitation of goth

You could read me Catcher In The Rye and watch me jack-off

I wear skin tight clothes while hating my life

If I said I like girls I’d only be half right

I look like I’m dead and dress like a homo

I must be emo

Screw XBOX I play old school Nintendo

I must be emo

I like to whine and hit my parentals

I must be emo

Me and my friends all look like clones

I must be emo

My parents don’t get me , you know?

They think I’m gay because they saw me kiss a guy ,well, a couple of guys

But I mean, it's the 2000's, can’t two, or four dudes make out with each other without being gay?

I mean chicks dig that kind of thing anyways

I don’t know diary, sometimes I think you’re the only one on that gets me, You’re my best friend, I feel like tacos.
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andygirl  12. 1. 2008 22:09
wow tak teraz vážne neviem čo od teba ešte čakať

čítam ju už asi tretí krát

písal si už niečo na túto tému?
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anjelik4195  13. 1. 2008 09:46
suuper je
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armita  27. 1. 2008 15:32
Krásna...(ešte si ju niekedy prečítam opäť)

...škoda,že svet nenosí ružové okuliare ...
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leniny7  4. 2. 2008 20:46
Tak opäť som si na teba klikla že si prečítam dáku tu kvalitku ,keď ja stagnujem už nestagnujem,ale to je jedno

ľubilo sa,chvalime
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