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Mám tam nejaké chyby?

ano máš. hneď prvá veta je bulshit.

ahhh zle som to prečítal sorry

čo si chcel povedať touto vetou?
Firstly, climate change there would exist without humans.

Po prvé, zmena klímy by existovala aj bez ľudí.

Peter Papcun,Košice? zavjimave

To nie som ja

@5 Napísala by som to ako: "..there would also be without people."

@as Tvoja veta je lepšia a aspoň mám o slovo viac a prečo je lepšie people než humans?

@debilko25 mne sa to tam viac hodí ale ak chceš nechaj si tam humans

@as No tak pre mňa to je jedno

nedáva zmysel -- Firstly, climate change there would exist without humans.

zorzumitelnejšie by bolo napísať niečo ako
Firstly, climate change is a a natural process that occurs regardless of people, although people do play a role in it.

potom ešte:
I agree with some OF THE things that Mrs Mills wrote ABOUT

I would be interested in HEARING your readers' opinions IN REGARDS TO THIS ISSUE

Dear Editor,

I am writing in response to Regina Mills's article „Humans aren't responsible for climate change. It's just a natural process“ that appeared in your newspaper two days ago. Personally, I agree with some things Mrs Mills wrote.

Firstly, climate change would still appear, no matter about the population. Furthermore, many people ignore climate change and consider it as a normal thing.

However, people are making climate change worse. People do not recycle and they do not separate waste. Many people burn rubbish. Humans are using the Earth's natural resources at 120 percent. (co chces povedat..?) Many people do not value what they have now and they want more.

Next, oil consumption has risen sevenfold and fishing has increased fourfold. People cut down forests and trees have no chance to grow. There are more and more cars on the Earth. Because of these activities, the ozone layer is getting thinner and thinner.

Finally, I disagree with the idea that people are innocent and they do not cause climate change.

I would be interested in hearing opinions of your readers' opinions in regards to this issue (thank you @sqash

Best Regards

Peter Papcun, Košice

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moja ucka angliny a geografie by ta poslali dpc s tymto XD ZIAADNEE topic sentence, ZIAADNEE conclusion, ZIAADNEEEE transitions, clovek nemoze 'flow with the text' ohmg.. sorry ale ja buduca ucka angliny som si neodpustila haha :-S

@lady2lol tak ako ty si opravila aj to čo som písal priamo z knihy, čiže chceš povedať že vieš lepšie anglinu ako Gateway?

nie len hovorim co by na hento povedala moja anglictinarka~ nehovorim ze viem ang lepsie ako on ofcs... a opravovala som to zo stranky ako by to malo byt spravne v 'anglickej forme', zrejme nepochopis co mam na mysli lebo samozrejme slovenske skoly ucia anglictinu ze uplne na hovno a ziadne ako sa pisu paragrafy, eseje ,lepsie vocab a taketo , vsak ty debilko?

DDDDD bože ty si originálna D jak piča na tvojom xichte